Thursday, April 21, 2005

dis right here!

is a nomet. erected after reading an example from blackestsheep in my LJ community... i liked the idea, so i tried one... it was harder than i expected. give it a try and post it so i can gush over your creativity!

9 lines:
1st line: 9 syllabels
2nd line: 8 syllabels
3rd line: 7 syllabels

and so on and so forth until the last line and last syllabel. here is try...

k:iss
there are no moments that match this one
two times we've met by chance pure luck
charming eyes and tongue rescue
my ideas drown inside
shivers electric
tryst between teeth
under moans
low pitch
perfect

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Mahogany graced the A.T.X
Rollin' with cast, pen and lyrics
words so strong had us perplexed
hexed, vexed, askin' what's next?
Poetic, that's what,
"King of Word-play"
So damn live,
Thank you
Jive

Anonymous said...

Slave must be written on my forehead
I remind them of what they hate
Naturally nappy with grace
Coffee will make you black
Stronger til the end
When its all done
Say my name
Corey!!!
slave?

Amanda Johnston said...

Mo, thanks! I had fun with this. Here is my little somethin' somethin'.
_____________________________

Warning Signs

fresh cut, new suit, ATM receipt
from other side of town next to
car keys waiting to close to
the front door glowing like
a neon warning
sign and you don’t
flinch, scream, cry
but you
cheer

Amanda Johnston said...

typo. should be

car keys waiting "too" close to

I'll work on it and try some more.

manda

Amanda Johnston said...

typo. should be

car keys waiting "too" close to

I'll work on it and try some more.

manda