Thursday, May 18, 2006

workshopping 2: pick a word

we were given words by the class (serene and i) then instructed to write a group poem (harder than u expect - trust me they whine about that one anyway) but here are the words:

powerful/outspoken/slut/bitch/freak/testimony/sweet/
infatuated/blue/fly/loyalty/ministry




and here is what i got:

She powerful vessel
outspoken freak society

she throw hips to the wind
and tongue in his ears

he yell nicknames like slut
swear her ministry be of the red light persuasion

show loyalty to the testimony of his rib
she smile sweet

swallow betrayal like sugar
infatuated with the blue fly
feeling she gets

swirling butterflies into cocoon havens
rub her womb
stirring sentiments

call her she-devil
birthing worlds
despite the wind

4 comments:

thir13teenandtheysayitain'tlucky said...

loved them both... ;o)

CousinSarah said...

he yell nicknames like slut
swear her ministry be of the red light persuasion

You are simply an amazing writer.

Shelle said...

swirling butterflies into cocoon havens, rub her womb, stirring sentiments...
my fav...i like the imagery

joey said...

babygirl...where u b?